Discussion Points / Topics

For designer: Neema Samawi
From Critiquer : Grace Lancaster

Aesthetic

• Is the design beautiful/striking/remarkable?

The designs are very crisp, the resolution and the placement is nice. The imagery also complements the typeface choice well.

• Does the design aesthetic relate to the concept?

yes ! very well unified

• Do the imagery and design choices support the text?

yes

• Is the aesthetic consistent?

yes

• Is the aesthetic driving the concept, or vice-versa?

yes

• Is it legible?

yes

• Are type size/color/face/treatment choices helping or hurting?

helping

Structure

• What are the design’s visual priorities?
• Are design elements working in contrast, complement, or conflict?
• What elements do you consider foreground? Background?

the images are nicely fit into the background, and yet they become central in importance over the text because they are so high contrast

• How will the design accommodate variability in browser width?
• Is transparency, if used, used appropriately?

Technical Challenges

• What happens at all of the sizes in between the desktop and mobile versions that have been provided?

the text merges over and scales down, it should be manageable for a solid responsive design

• Will elements such as fonts transfer as intended to the browser environment?

yes, it is a font that can be accessed via google fonts/typekit

• Can you build it?

yes